Colors Blooming in the Sky

Stormy Rainy Day

Raindrops gathering

Seasonal colors blooming 

A rainbow splatters

Author's Note

Feedback please

Reviews

[Neville]

I doubt anyone who visits this page will be able to leave without a smile on their face :)

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

Pic and poem are awesome. You are an artist indeed. Enjoyed with much looking forwaed.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Cameron@Poet]

Okay so the first thing I have to say is that photo is beautiful. Okay now the poem. It, like your others is great. It's just a short sweet little thing indirectly talking about a rainbow. I LOVE IT! :)

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

A breathtaking poem, it feels as if you reached inside the picture and pulled it out in the form of words. Colorful and vivid. I particularly liked the usage of the ‘raindrops gathering’ and how it ended with ‘rainbow splatters’ really felt as if the whole poem came together.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[M. J. Smith]

Not quite a true haiku. Second line should only have seven syllables. Beautiful poem nonetheless. Nicely done. And like you, I am so ready for Spring.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the feedback. I think I fixed it! Thank you so much for reading!