A well-presented Haiku, but I'm not fond of "splatters". I'd look for another word. --- But, hey, that is me and this is your poem, you are the one to make it shine.
Rainbows splatters.. food for thought..
Really enjoyed your words..
Imagine 101
Lisa
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm storiestotell. Thanks for stoping by!
2 Years Ago
Oh gosh so many different poets here with such similar names.. I apologise storiestotell love that n.. read moreOh gosh so many different poets here with such similar names.. I apologise storiestotell love that name.. Lisa
Oh, it's okay! It's hard to keep up with everything. Glad you stopped by.
2 Years Ago
It is so difficult..as you say.. Thank you for understanding..
Lisa.. today in cold rainy Sou.. read moreIt is so difficult..as you say.. Thank you for understanding..
Lisa.. today in cold rainy Southern Spain..
When it comes to haikus I rarely count syllable anymore. I simply enjoy the thought that's put don on paper. And this is a beautiful thought. I love the comparison of raindrops and slattering of the rainbow.
A wonderful use of words shared my dear friend. I love an Evening dust sun near the lake. My favorite and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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