Colors Blooming in the Sky

Colors Blooming in the Sky

A Poem by KAREN
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Stormy Rainy Day

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Raindrops gathering
Seasonal colors blooming 
A rainbow splatters

© 2022 KAREN


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KAREN
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A well-presented Haiku, but I'm not fond of "splatters". I'd look for another word. --- But, hey, that is me and this is your poem, you are the one to make it shine.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you! And I like your honesty!
JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

I try to be honest, but not hurtful.
KAREN

2 Years Ago

I like that kind of review!
Visually beautiful. Very nicely composed.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
What a beautiful Haiku! I love it. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
lovely haiku with beautiful imagery...

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
Rainbows splatters.. food for thought..
Really enjoyed your words..
Imagine 101
Lisa

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Oh, it's okay! It's hard to keep up with everything. Glad you stopped by.
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

It is so difficult..as you say.. Thank you for understanding..
Lisa.. today in cold rainy Sou.. read more
KAREN

2 Years Ago

You're welcome! Warm cloudy day in Mississippi!
When it comes to haikus I rarely count syllable anymore. I simply enjoy the thought that's put don on paper. And this is a beautiful thought. I love the comparison of raindrops and slattering of the rainbow.

Excellent poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
A wonderful use of words shared my dear friend. I love an Evening dust sun near the lake. My favorite and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
Very nicely written, love the imagery a lot

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nice Imagery, very colorful ... , if this is a Haiku, I think you may have one too many syllables... but who cares, it's still lovely...
Best, B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I think I got it fixed.
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

It’s lovely😊

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Added on February 27, 2022
Last Updated on March 4, 2022
Tags: Rainbow, Sky, Colors, Clouds, Rain

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

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