Chemo Buddies

'Chemo Buddies'
storiestotell,
I found your first chapter to be a good one. Elements of personality within Jade really sparked my imagination. I felt for her very much as she experiences the pain of cancer in her body. The bleeding was scary and I am sure the impact on others as she was stalled in traffic. I really enjoyed the dynamics of a teen's feelings as their own body fights against the soul. The young man too was a good descriptive element as he desires to hold onto his football playing the difficulties faced with the disease. Pretty good job. It must of taken some time and work and research.
Bless you.
kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago