Emotion Hide Within a Broken Tear

Emotions hide within

a broken tear

drifting somewhere in

your heart,

they whisper unheard cries.

You keep my reality

shattered across

my memories

where they lay unseen.

All my pain

you hold together

with your smile,

drowning every breath

I take.

A shadow of pleasure

outlines your face

until my soul speaks

existence that

covers my scars.

I wander lost inside

your trust

knowing soon every

emotion will die

within a broken tear.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Relic]

This to me is like devestation of the soul. One controls another and there's no relief or renewal of happy feelings. Only a cage to exist in.

This is sad, for sure, Karen.

[KAREN]

Thanks for the read!

[Writergurl]

Loved that last stanza, you sum up your writes wonderful, nicely written and expressed

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

I love the pic and the poem. Very expressive and touching. You writewith impact.
Keep it up.

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are so welcome.

[Susan 🦋]

I love a poem that I can feel! And you got it here!...Whispers of longing echo within a broken tear.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[duff]

That person who is your backbone will always be that. A bond of smiles holding hands. I enjoyed it.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The ending was so powerful, "every emotion will die within a broken tear". Nicely written poem. tyfs

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Miss Sharon]

(I wander lost inside your trust knowing soon every emotion will die within a broken tear.)Although sad, this is a beautifully written piece of poetic prosody...and I don't say that to everyone! ~Sharon

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Ken Simm.]

There are lines in this that capture me. Excellent romantic melodrama.

[KAREN]

Thank for your kind words!

[Neville]

it is good storiestotell .. your words here conjure up so many sadnesses (now I know that aint a word in the strictest of senses) but it fits the overall & general feeling of sadness, uncertainty, hurt & loss you have skillfully woven throughout ..................... very much enjoyed, I am sure others will feel similarly when they arrive here ... Neville

[KAREN]

Thank you!