Love Once Lived In A Lost Heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wistful tears flow in the after glow

A profound dream reflects empty emotions

Silent memories kiss a broken life

Expressions of pain absorb into rhythmic songs

Colorless whispers ensure the tone of a lonely reality

Textured thoughts wither her mind,

While her shipwrecked  heart sings,

Sos

 

Sorrow meditates and embrace the cold

Warmth weeps visions of love buried beneath broken promises

Laughter dances briefly  upon the sunny breeze

Time breathes in array of shimmering touches

That fade in passing hours etched from long ago,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

A cloak of despair soars in eloquence,

Tracing the last tender shadows of love they once shared

Lyrical voices reveal the yearning she feels

her prelude now reminiscences in blooms of darkness

Togetherness is now a shallow envision,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

A taste of him still lingers in the depth of her impression

Inner strength fades with her solitude

Anguish encourages distant affection to imitate her

Stillness of tomorrow's future arches two bodies that have grown apart,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

 

 

Author's Note

Been a while! Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Now the appendage takes its own shape, severed it seeks new .and the old flags truths still wave on torn stained soaked in flashes of glory, swaddling wrapped memories to fill the wall of hope, etched ready to stencil ,to pass on , to endure.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i liked your repetition...it kept on making me remember your protagonist's deep, painful feelings

[KAREN]

Thank you for the read!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome

[Tina Kline]

A very impressive poem. The sadness and heartache sing in this. A very beautiful yet tragic poem!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

wow!!!

love how each stanza keeps the power of the poem going....

great :)

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Valentine]

Very nice write lovely in fact ..the picture fit also..Katihe

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and poetry was beautiful.
"Togetherness is now a shallow envision,
While her ship wrecked heart sings,
Sos"
I could feel the sadness and heartbreak in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Frieda P]

This heart has definitely taken a tumble under the darkest of seas, and now she'e shipwrecked. I like the repetition of SOS...like that desperate call for help that never seems to come. Nice one.

[KAREN]

Thanks!