Love Once Lived In A Lost Heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wistful tears flow in the after glow

A profound dream reflects empty emotions

Silent memories kiss a broken life

Expressions of pain absorb into rhythmic songs

Colorless whispers ensure the tone of a lonely reality

Textured thoughts wither her mind,

While her shipwrecked  heart sings,

Sos

 

Sorrow meditates and embrace the cold

Warmth weeps visions of love buried beneath broken promises

Laughter dances briefly  upon the sunny breeze

Time breathes in array of shimmering touches

That fade in passing hours etched from long ago,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

A cloak of despair soars in eloquence,

Tracing the last tender shadows of love they once shared

Lyrical voices reveal the yearning she feels

her prelude now reminiscences in blooms of darkness

Togetherness is now a shallow envision,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

A taste of him still lingers in the depth of her impression

Inner strength fades with her solitude

Anguish encourages distant affection to imitate her

Stillness of tomorrow's future arches two bodies that have grown apart,

While her shipwrecked heart sings,

Sos

 

 

 

Author's Note

Been a while! Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Woody]

beautiful creative writing! stunning word choice.
this is a very enjoyable read, indeed.
(I believe shipwrecked is one word)

[KAREN]

Thank you, Dear friend!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I like this homage to longing. To carry the empty candle holder while we walk aimless in the darkness, long after the wax from the candle has vaporized,,,,, Excellent word choices, that extract vivid images from the darkened mist.

[KAREN]

Thank you very much for the review!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

my pleasure

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautifully bittersweet song... the sounds of sorrow flowing from a heart once full.. once free... Moving and lyric in its soft lines...

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Ladysue]

such a sad poem, a shipwrecked heart truly is a lonely one..in need of care and you have creatively expressed this..nicely done..

[closed]

love the eloquence of this poem storie
I couldn't stop reading
great write

-Dream

[Leigh]

You are back with a bang I'd say, this is quite a piece, a ship wreck to represent emotions is a great image metaphor/analogy.

Nice photo too

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a shipwrecked heart.......such a lonely heart this must be. Well done

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Jack...]

This is a stunning piece of work. As I read I was taken away, adrift on a sorrowful sea. I could feel the longng and the desire of her heart. You have captured the emotion of needing so nicely here. Very nice.

[KAREN]

Thank you! I want readers to be able to feel what they are reading. I stive to get better and better.

[Eric Cox]

Wow. Definitely a strong write. Great chorus line to it. Strong creative writing. Such sadness within penned with a beauty.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome.