The Scenery Of His Heart Lays.......

For the creative poetry group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She lays searching for his return

Feminine body emphatic against his car

Minutes pass with hours ticking in bright colors

Illuminated by the sun's rays, warmth wraps her

Desire burns and fuels her longing

Her heart pumps courage as she waits for his return

 

Silence in the air carries a graceful peace

She attunes her eyes to wait for him,

While her artful mind plans to capture his love

The artist of her soul paints images of him and her together

Doors of the future become her dreams of today,

And  the meditation of a new beginning

 

Collection of tears ignite, stirring the coals of passion

Each flirtatious gesture is an alluring temptation for him

Bare skin becomes heated with a soft glow of anticipation

Newly turned hope waters lips that need his tasteful kiss

Tiny prisms of moisture gathers, waiting for his touch

Fragrant with energy, secret cravings linger

 

Her mystifying conscious sends a sensation to leave,

But shadows of doubt beg her to stay and fulfill her hunger

Lyrical movement of heat rising in her unearths her delight

Untamed thoughts cause moans to soar

Keys to her heart are his to unlock

 

Dewy skin drinks in his enticing smile

His dimples spill an emotional message

His voice cracks with a hint of drama

"Get off my car before you scratch it!"

 

Now she knows where the scenery of his heart lays

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

what I think, I think you should read "the Devils Prize" A Angel on his car.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Raven Starhawk]

Holy buckets! Greatly penned. As I read I kept asking myself is this really about a man's passion for cars...or something else, but then again my mind is poop right now and I may have the meaning all wrong, but regardless I liked this poem.

[KAREN]

Thanks so much, and you had it right. She has passion for him, but his heart is with the car. Thank you for the review!!

[KAREN]

Very creative I must say! :) makes me smile...
her disire, on that car, reaches a Sangri-La
And then the male awakening... hard, and egoistic
Splendid write dear poetess!

E.L.

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Guys do love their cars. That part stuck out for me. A nice romantic poem.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

I like this. A beautiful and romantic poem with a sassy ending. That part made me smile...its so believable. Fantastic poem!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great imagery! You told a story of love and disappointment so perfectly! Shame on him!!

[KAREN]

Thank you, sister!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Welcome!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very entertaining and fun read! esp. the ending :)

[KAREN]

Thank You!

[Shellie]

I like it. Its just good. The only thing was the word femininity, its just caught there. just feminine sounds better. Other than that I liked the style and the use of phrases.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Wakeofahero]

Just saying if it were that girl, I'd pick her! Lol. But on a serious note I like this, some people are so obsessed with objects they forget the people around themselves they truly care about. And besides a car can't talk OR love you back, it is only an object. Well done, you caught one of the things that potentially ruins mankind. I enjoyed this write a lot!

[KAREN]

Thank you!