The Scenery Of His Heart Lays.......

For the creative poetry group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She lays searching for his return

Feminine body emphatic against his car

Minutes pass with hours ticking in bright colors

Illuminated by the sun's rays, warmth wraps her

Desire burns and fuels her longing

Her heart pumps courage as she waits for his return

 

Silence in the air carries a graceful peace

She attunes her eyes to wait for him,

While her artful mind plans to capture his love

The artist of her soul paints images of him and her together

Doors of the future become her dreams of today,

And  the meditation of a new beginning

 

Collection of tears ignite, stirring the coals of passion

Each flirtatious gesture is an alluring temptation for him

Bare skin becomes heated with a soft glow of anticipation

Newly turned hope waters lips that need his tasteful kiss

Tiny prisms of moisture gathers, waiting for his touch

Fragrant with energy, secret cravings linger

 

Her mystifying conscious sends a sensation to leave,

But shadows of doubt beg her to stay and fulfill her hunger

Lyrical movement of heat rising in her unearths her delight

Untamed thoughts cause moans to soar

Keys to her heart are his to unlock

 

Dewy skin drinks in his enticing smile

His dimples spill an emotional message

His voice cracks with a hint of drama

"Get off my car before you scratch it!"

 

Now she knows where the scenery of his heart lays

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

I admire the line: "Desire burns and fuels her longing". Love`s itself a fire; longing desire to ignite the engine of heart with honor. Till the last stanza, you`ve expressed the sensations of raged love what it feels for someone`s heart .. in hope to make nights delight with the passionate soul but, as you reached out to the last verse... everything got rolled up! A very "tasteful" version i`ve seen in the last few lines even I read the last phrase "twice" a time and, at the end, I find ... "the heart where you`ve lived bunches of times got betrayed by the wickedness of someone for whom you`d awaited for long & after tasting the drops of your love, your own love`d painted the new "scenery" of someone`s heart with whom you loved; lived & breathed countless times."

One of my favorite writes. Some kinda "modern--life" truth i`ve seen through such a piece. Many versions`re depicted into your words. Car. Love. Night. Memories. Awaiting for someone. Such things made the very clear/vivid imagery on readers mind to impress him with the sensual shades of words. Nice imagery. I`d be looking forward to reading your stuffs.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much! And thanks for the friend invite!

[Wórdsmíth]

Sounds good by me!

[Ladysue]

a fantastic romantic write..creatively done..

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I have said this before and I will once again. You need to write romance novels. I used to love to read them as a teen. Awesome romantic write. Good to see you again :) i meant to add with a hilarious realistic ending :)

[Eric Cox]

A cool write. Creative, poetically penned imagery with a great jab of humor at the end. Nicely done.

[KAREN]

Thanks!!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to decision for some men. Car or beautiful woman. I have prefer beautiful woman but some men do love those cars. Nice description create a good vision. Photo gave life to the poetry. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[David Scott]

Well, I for one could care less about a paint job with all that going on... Had my pulse quicken.
Great write! Loved it. Even better than the picture! Ha

[KAREN]

Thanks again for the review!

[Jvl narasimharao]

A great longing for the lover

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sensual beautiful and a little sad in places. to long for something can be hard at times. I could feel the emotions pouring out in this whole piece.

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[Ruth]

Had me tense until the end, as always love :) Always a pleasure to read xoxo

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Star Wolf]

Cars and a pretty girl, which is it? Great poem, I really enjoyed this a lot!

[KAREN]

thanks!