Pain Drowns In Tears Of Hope

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her pain drowns in tears of hope,

while images of his face

dance between freedom and loneliness.

Pictorial poetry memories

rest inside her abandon mind,

and her heart summons her inner

strength to swim in her

tears of hope.

 

She resides in tranquility to get

ready for the self-examination of what

she did wrong.

Despair lengthens as the windless night

hums a monotonous tone of what once was.

Illusions pray for the songs of her soul

as she struggles to stay above

tears of hope.

 

A lullaby of his voice keeps her afloat

as calm and peace waver around

her waist as a life preserver.

Vunerability threatens to sink her

into the depths of her own

tears of hope.

 

She breathes in colors of dreams,

and that somewhere in time

he will return and rescue her before she drowns in

tears of hope.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think? Sorry about the big space!!!

Reviews

[Ruth]

Gorgeous!
Each line rendered with absolute emotion and depth...
Sorrowful yet elegant xoxo

[KAREN]

Thanks do much for stopping by!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"drowning in tears of hope"...

what a creative line! it's very quotable, and shows great perseverance!

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great shot..!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

A very painful situation waiting for someone to call, hoping they will come back and ease the pain of loss. Very well written poem.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Impressive write. The pain that keeps us hoping they will return. That only breeds more pain but how can we not hope? I like this one!

[KAREN]

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done emotional write. I may have spotted a few grammar/spelling errors, but the flow and emotion is done perfectly.

[KAREN]

Thanks, I hope I got all the errors! I found one misspelled word. I do thank you for your help! Grammar and I do not always get alone. LOL

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A mixture of emotions written perfectly...great work :)

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written with love and hope, but sadden seeps in with doubts of him ever returning! Love the setting and the imagery! Awesome poem!

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poem. In deep thoughts. The mind can take us to many places. I like the artwork and location of the poem. The ending made the poem complete. Easy to fall into the same place.
Coyote

[KAREN]

Thanks for the review!