Pain Drowns In Tears Of Hope

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her pain drowns in tears of hope,

while images of his face

dance between freedom and loneliness.

Pictorial poetry memories

rest inside her abandon mind,

and her heart summons her inner

strength to swim in her

tears of hope.

 

She resides in tranquility to get

ready for the self-examination of what

she did wrong.

Despair lengthens as the windless night

hums a monotonous tone of what once was.

Illusions pray for the songs of her soul

as she struggles to stay above

tears of hope.

 

A lullaby of his voice keeps her afloat

as calm and peace waver around

her waist as a life preserver.

Vunerability threatens to sink her

into the depths of her own

tears of hope.

 

She breathes in colors of dreams,

and that somewhere in time

he will return and rescue her before she drowns in

tears of hope.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think? Sorry about the big space!!!

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

BEAUTIFUL and strong a graceful read

[KAREN]

Thanks!!!!

[Eric Cox]

A painful situation penned with strong emotion filled imagery touched by a beauty.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)

[Valentine]

Sad isn't it to lose a love at any time in a persons life..my husband..blue eyes..brown hair..six foot three..left last year to go hunting..He came back in two days..a different person..He has had so many tests..They say dementia..first they thought a stroke..what ever it was..I am losing him more each day and God knows how much I miss the man that he was..deep piece..hit me hard..love Valentine

[KAREN]

Thanks for the review! And I'm so sorry for the pain you're going through.
My prayers are with you! God bless!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

drowning in tears of hope, a swim I know all too well. Excellent write.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Raven Starhawk]

Truly mentally stimulating.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful :)

[KAREN]

thanks!

[David Scott]

Perfect imagery. You painted a scene that had this reader hoping you would loose hope before you drown. The last line shows the futility and the beauty at once. Hope is both beautiful and pathetic here. Loved it.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Star Wolf]

One of those very painful situations to be in. I really enjoyed reading this. It reads very true to life. Awesome job.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! This is heartfelt... The emotions of drowning in sorrow is depicted so eloquently. You have written this in such an amazing style. Very romantic and fragile. So lovely!

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!!

[Poetic Beauty]

Drowning in tears of hope. I get that phrase. SOmetimes we have hope but should let it go before it takes us over when what we are hoping for isn't ever going to happen. Sometimes in life moving on is the scariest possibility but is what we truly need.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Poetic Beauty]

you are more than welcome