When Love sees Beyond The Face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When love sees beyond the face eyes hear only sweet whispers

Kisses play musical notes that casscade down their emotions

Hearts see passion joining two bodies as one,

And sighs are anwers of togetherness

 

When love sees beyond the face lips taste the beauty they hear

A touch from each other wraps them in a scent of bliss

Their breathing turns to rhythmical singing,

And their love shines in the darkness

 

When love sees beyond the face silence speaks their names

Time becomes a hour glass of forever heard only by them

Happiness is seen in images of vivid colors,

And tears are seen as flashes of joy

 

When love sees beyond the face he leads her with his heart,

And she guides him with the pleasure she feels

Treasures are the little things they keep close,

And beauty for them is seen beyond the face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good shot..!!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Amazingly written peice.. A wonderful write :)

[KAREN]

Thanks for the review!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like this a lot. Love is expressed in so many different ways. Very romantic indeed.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Valentine]

How true..so many people just look at a peresons covering..are they handsome or pretty..when it is what is inside of their heart and mind taht is important..Looks are only skin deep..love Kathie

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[ElizabethRaine]

This is absolutely wonderfully written. The image goes very well with the poem (I have no clue as to how you found this!). It seems in your poem that you have truly captured the feeling and meaning of love. It is hard to find these days or in the youth of today when someone hears someone say 'He's hot' or 'I just love his face' or 'He's sexy', but come to find they are only talking about the features. But with this poem, it seems to allow the reader to instill a certain amount of hope in the human race and know that there are others who believe in love from within and of what the couple makes of it and that looks, nor age has anything to do with the matter of love. Love is in the heart of the couple and the memories they make. You have worded it to a tee and this is something that, I think, could make a great impact on anyone's life and the way they see love as a whole.

[KAREN]

WOW! Thank you so much for the excellent review!!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a beautiful poem. It made me feel joy.
You've captured the pure essence of love.

[KAREN]

Thanks so much for the review!

[Poetic Beauty]

See in beyond the face is very important. It opens up a whole new world when we allow other senses to take over. A magical world that will soar with passion.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Tina Kline]

Impressive poem! There's more to love than the beauty that eyes can see. I love this one!

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

True love is really blind but it also give us the best sight in seeing the joy of life. I think this is great.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautifully written. Namaste.

[KAREN]

Thanks!!