When Love sees Beyond The Face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When love sees beyond the face eyes hear only sweet whispers

Kisses play musical notes that casscade down their emotions

Hearts see passion joining two bodies as one,

And sighs are anwers of togetherness

 

When love sees beyond the face lips taste the beauty they hear

A touch from each other wraps them in a scent of bliss

Their breathing turns to rhythmical singing,

And their love shines in the darkness

 

When love sees beyond the face silence speaks their names

Time becomes a hour glass of forever heard only by them

Happiness is seen in images of vivid colors,

And tears are seen as flashes of joy

 

When love sees beyond the face he leads her with his heart,

And she guides him with the pleasure she feels

Treasures are the little things they keep close,

And beauty for them is seen beyond the face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ghost]

Well I believe the magic of this, because I have been this in love that i seen and felt it with my soul and heart without my eyes being involved... And this kind of love is magical, heavenly bliss and it is real... Thanks for sharing this

[Wórdsmíth]

Liked the below lines:

"Kisses play musical notes that casscade down their emotions
Hearts see passion joining two bodies as one,
And sighs are anwers of togetherness"

I appreciate such lines. Here, one more thing i`ve found in the above three lines that you`ve used the vertical composition of "K H A" which stands by ... "K=Kiss; H=Hugs/Hearts; A=Arms/Answers" which defined that "kissed" up the nights and "embrace" the sky and wrap the "arms" around the peace of "unspoken" words which come through the lovers` "sighs". What a beautiful and so deep pattern you`ve whirled around the page. Liked your work. Now your poetry work`s really attracting me towards your pages. Sounds good by me.

[KAREN]

Thank you for your nice words!

[Sundownsam]

Very nice poem with style.

[Poppie Mira]

Beautiful.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful. A creative, elegant write.

[KAREN]

Thank You!

[Dr. Wood ?]

wonderful poem...great title....Many of us do see beyond the face......You hear it everywhere.."What DOES she see in him..oh she could do SO much better" Maybe she HAS

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Star Wolf]

Sometimes there are no words to express what we feel. A wonderful and romantic poem.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i really like this poem...there's definitely more to all true romances than just a pretty face-mutual, enveloping passion must be felt by both!

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Raven Starhawk]

This is enchanting. I wish so many could live by the words you have penned.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Wakeofahero]

"When love sees beyond the face he leads her with his heart,
And she guides him with the pleasure she feels
Treasures are the little things they keep close,
And beauty for them is seen beyond the face"

That got me so bad in this. You finished so great. It is true though, love shouldn't just be about the attraction you have to a person, it is about the feeling behind it. You love the person for them. Not for their past, money, or what they look like; it is a much deeper connection, and I think you honestly captured that. Well done. Defiantly made my favorites! 10/10 :)!

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!