If He Could Dream Her A Dream

If He Could Dream Her A Dream

A Poem by KAREN
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If he could dream her a dream, magic of eternity would uplift her and she would see them together forever.

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A smile landing on her cheek is a kiss from him, it leaves firey passion in its path

Her beauty is fashioned in his eyes with each breath she takes

The softness of her heart where painful memories live causes him to love her more

If he could dream her a dream magic of eternity would uplift her,

And she would see them together forever

 

His mind occupies every thought he sees her take

She is his little piece of heaven when her warmth covers him

Her touch sings upon his spine, sending vibrant moans into the quiet

The world he created is a refuge for her to feel loved and safe

If he could dream her a dream she would know her own strength and beauty,

And she would feel free from the past that shadows her

 

Their love inspires him romantically, it's a postcard that leaves him messages

Celestical joy are the rings they wear on their fingers, filling him with amorous desire

For him their marriage is a soul-satisfying unforgetable story

If he could dream her a dream she would know their love was forever,

And they would live happy ever after

 

 

© 2012 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
Been awhile, tell me what you think.

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Loved this!! Very well written. Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so enchanting, and has a beautiful elusive factor over it... You're so good at writing poems like this. Such a sweet poem dear one.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I hope to get better and better!

12 Years Ago

For me you're already great dear! I so enjoyed this.
Sweet poem. Ethereal and sensual. hard to do both at the same time, but you pulled it off here. Nice!
Cheers!
RG

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
I wonder whether I can ever write a romantic poem like this.I have known that it is better to read good poets like you than to write some ordinary poems like mine.

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you! Your review makes me feel like my writing is worth reading! I asure you though that you.. read more
Sister, this is so romantic and filled with passion and beauty! One of my faves!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you, very much!
True love....it means in part you'd give your life for the other person...very wonderful and powerful romantic poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
Very beautiful, very romantic and very enchanting. What a wonderful dream he dreams for her. It's all about loving the other so very much!

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
"Her touch sings upon his spine, sending vibrant moans into the quiet"

love this line- such sensual pleasures! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
"If he could dream her a dream she would know their love was forever,
And they would live happy ever after"

Took my breath away...so romantic :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


KAREN

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!

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Added on September 8, 2012
Last Updated on September 8, 2012
Tags: Love, Marriage, Eternity, Strength

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

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