Who I Want to Be

I want to be that special person
who will be proud of whatever you do.

See you succeed at anything,
and be there for everything.

The one you'll love,
even if I'm clueless.

Who can get you to smile,
even when you're in a bad mood.

Who you'll share all your thoughts with,
and who will help you when you're stressed.

The one who will never let go,
and refuse to let you fall.

Reviews

[Brittney]

i really like this. it remaids me of my poem My one and only. you should look at it. great job.

[Enigma]

I'm confused. Is it written about a friend or a lover...lol
Wow!! Awesome!! A brand new concept for me.And it's beautifully conveyed. From the choice of words to the flow of the poem, everything feels perfect.Reading it made me smile.I'll be sending this to all my friends right away....^_^
Great Write!!!

[Suki]

I love this. It's beautiful!

[Kristine]

even if I'm clueless.
even when you're in a bad mood.
and who will help you when you're stressed.

... =]

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

Your officially my hero.
love the ending.