Bleeding Love

The bleeding heart is our love,
it soars through our souls, as if a dove.
Beautiful and graceful in its complexity;
it leaves all others in a sense of perplexity.
 
The drop of blood is our struggle,
whatever the issue, we can juggle.
All our strife is shared as one,
I will be with you unless of course, you shun.
 
The white in the blood is our hope,
made from our love to help us cope.
With challenges we face everyday,
tis the shining star that guides our way.
 
All I ask from the bleeding heart,
is that it stays, a work of art,
and hope what we've taken six months to create
will continue on in a prosprous fate.

Reviews

[J.Black]

I wrote a song/poem called Bleed Love, and this reminds me so much of what I wrote as well.
Overall, it was beautifully written.

[Evangelis]

beautiful~

[Marilyn My Bitterness]

Awe that was really sweet. I liked the rhyme scheme. The flow was very natural and easy to read. Amazing work!

[Kristine]

this poem=love


....literally.