Paranioa

Paranioa

A Poem by Stone Fox
"

Those drug induced moments were you think everyone is talking about you.

"
Waned and weary with only toil and trouble
my limbs could only travel this journey tired. .

In my head to in my mind
-which coincidentally were not the same thing-
thoughts seemed to expire from the zealous fear found in your gaping wide darkness of speech.

My serenely spiritual soul's mythical secret shadow sparkled as a jewel:

Boundlessly black but brazenly beauteous by day, but by night,

my mind mentioned masses of decoratively hung ghastly gossip,
secretively shushed into silence
                   never
     ever
                                  to be a quick quiet find for any of us.


 

© 2016 Stone Fox


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fun with alliteration eh!? just about every line a treat to read ..as a whole ...had to read several times to pick up on strong ties to the title ..but then the light went on ... very creative ...you seem to stretch your lines to the edge beyond which your meaning may have been lost ... paranoia is difficult ..especially in regular doses ...can drive one mad ... have to admit your closing leaves me a bit clueless :} and i will spend some thought on the difference between my head and my mind ;)) pretty sure i will come back and read when i myself am in a different state of mind ..have to tell you once more ..glad to see you posting again :)
E.



Posted 8 Years Ago


Either the first sentence needs one period or one more (for three) for an ellipse?
Anyway, my favorite line is the side note that the head and mind/brain weren't the same in your perspective. That's quite creative and I like how you hid that in there, in a way.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Stone Fox
Stone Fox

Dallas, TX



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