Forever Farewells

goodbyes are such sweet sorrow.

For a moment, 

Looking upward,

I suspected they had fallen from the sky. 

Taking a long breathe, standing firm with determination, I observed every single detail. 

Some of them were much better off than the rest of us-

They were no longer bound to any physical bond or any emotional ones for that matter..

From afar,

a herd of hesitating horns hysterically hushed a crescendo of errors, 

cruelly cutting away and turning across a zig-zag dance that could be heard for miles.  

The moon, 

brightly busy making the night sky frisky and fine, 

Survived the still sound. 

Gently glowing with an emptiness, 

that endowed complete isolation to all wondering eyes. 

The rest of us meekly posed, waiting for a quick promised death.

It was our time-it was our right. 

Holding my form I became a statue.  

Delicately frozen in a formal gesture of forever farewells. 

Author's Note

Good you didnt like it. Dont tell me why- that was thick with sarcasm tell me why.

Reviews

[I'mtheinstagator]

Like this one a lot. Out of body experience type description.

[Ed Hart]

often, those who step far forward and develop voice that rumbles beneath the surface, so that what is unique has to rest with the more common forms of musicality to give itself a name that it can nest in, such as your songs...congratulations

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness ...how very tragic ..well said ..emotive for me to be sure .. the cold moon can be so very isolated ... weeping isolation on all onlookers .. really like this one Stoney ..nice job!
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[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!