This Feeling

There is nothing like this feeling of drowning and smoking while floating.

The night has seduced me, tempting me into igniting the stars; So I can then touch the depths of your subconsciousness.. My body secretly shakes as i gaze into your void.

No, there is nothing like the sensation of being glued apart.

I must confess you have me craving the darkest caress in the brightest of places.

I would request to slow down but that’s how we started this timeless dance; Ours is a complex song with lyrics in a foreign tongue.

I sway, twirl, and I jump to the rush-but I do not comprehend our promise:

The promise of our never-ending game. Forever seeking the endless hunger in shadows.

It’s a unique temptation.This feeling that constantly circles me.

I will spend lifetimes searching for something that might miraculously come close to being its equal, a failure that we both know will haunt me. Nothing will ever come close to this toxic torture of pleasure that is our rhythm.

Our pressed up against each other-your body to  my body-curse.  

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

skirting the edge ... where the dark threatens to swallow us whole ... such passionate abandon .. where angels fear to tread ;)
i almost think i am peering into a very private journal ... one that mixes fantasy and reality and lures me ... that sprinkle of danger .. oh my! ;)
i feel almost the voyeur
E.
ps. i was already excited to see you posted anew Fox! love and peace!

[Stone Fox]

Thank you so much! As usual your reviews are always wanted and a joy to read as well. Thank you for your honesty Einstein.

-Stone

[Einstein Noodle]

love and peace back at ya Stoney ..:)

[Ronnie]

It's a unique temptation. liked your poem. well written.

[Stone Fox]

thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
-Stone.