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A Poem by stimey
a broken word,a broken bottle, and a broken man.
© 2012 stimey
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"10 words" contest submission
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a perfect 10 words to describe a homeless man who was let go by society and hangs on to this bottle as his only pride.
i could see a veteran who was promised a job when he got back from the war, but then the word was broken, and now he has a life on the streets as payment for service to his country.
you put so much into ten words here.
jacob
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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simple, but has a clear picture and a hidden story rumbling beneath the surface. well done!
God bless
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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a perfect 10 words to describe a homeless man who was let go by society and hangs on to this bottle as his only pride.
i could see a veteran who was promised a job when he got back from the war, but then the word was broken, and now he has a life on the streets as payment for service to his country.
you put so much into ten words here.
jacob
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
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Added on November 10, 2012
Last Updated on November 15, 2012
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