Identity

A work I thought of in song format for a jazzier tune.

My name is low

My sight is dim

My feet are cold

My neck is thin

An oddity

Or so it seems to me

So trivial it is 

To care at all

That I am i

That i am low

That low is i 

Yes low is i

Well arnt ya special

Well arnt ya bright 

To sing your song

Oh day and night

One thing I know 

Im not the best 

No not at all

Its what I know best

My fingers reach for

No point my mind sees

I reach for the inside 

Thats all I need

My name is low 

No colour can i see

No black no white 

But grey as it seems

My name is low

I need not your pettty tricks 

My name is low

I am untouchable

Oo its a miracle

Truly unbreakable

Ive never felt what Ive heard about

Can you imagine

What love is like

Does such emotion 

Stay your whole life

Cause when it comes 

I know for sure 

I hope it stays

To make me happy 

Today : -)

Reviews

it's like you're putting yourself down, and then suddenly something or someone is lifting you back up.