The Woman By The Window

The Woman By The Window

A Story by steve
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A horror story.

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A strange noise from outside caused the boy to wake up.‭  ‬Opening his eyes he wiped them with his hand.‭  ‬He yawned,‭ ‬realising he had school in the morning.‭  ‬He needed a pee,‭ ‬but he didn't want to wake up his mum because since his dad had left,‭ ‬supposedly moving in with another woman,‭ ‬his mother's personality had changed dramatically.‭  ‬He remembered her being such a happy person,‭ ‬always a smile on her face,‭ ‬but now she was different,‭ ‬especially to him.‭  ‬He fought back tears wishing his father would come back home so things could get back to normal.‭  
"Please come back,‭" ‬Nathan said sadly while placing his hands together like he was praying.
‬It was chilly in the room which he didn't like one bit.‭  ‬He got out of bed and put his stripy dressing gown on.‭  ‬Then reluctantly proceeded towards the bathroom‭ ‬that was just down the hall.‭  ‬As he passed his mum's bedroom he could hear her talking to herself,‭ ‬which wasn't abnormal these days.‭  ‬In the last week she'd begun drinking heavily which explained her bad moods.‭  ‬Her behaviour scared him very much.‭  ‬Once he'd made it to the toilet he urinated as quietly as he could,‭ ‬then flushed it.‭   ‬With great care he tiptoed back to his room shutting the door.‭  ‬Five minutes later and Nathan was back in his bed trying to get back to sleep.‭  ‬Because he was scared of the dark he always had a lamp turned on which caused a pleasant glow.‭  ‬He was becoming a little annoyed now.‭  ‬He heard a smash coming from his mum's room as she must of knocked over a glass while asleep.‭ 
All of a sudden a figure was seen at the window.‭  ‬But before he could react his eyes became heavy with sleep.‭  ‬Within moments he had drifted off.
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‬She stormed in with an angry look on her face.‭  "‬You're late for school,‭" ‬she screamed at the top of her voice.
‬Nathan looked up startled as he clutched the quilt.‭  "‬I'm sorry,‭ ‬mother,‭" ‬he pleaded.
"‬That's not bloody good enough.‭  ‬I can tell you're that b*****d's son.‭  ‬Now get ready quick,‭" ‬she replied.
‬She looked a mess,‭ ‬her hair was all over the place.‭  ‬She threw some clothes onto the bed.
‬Nathan wanted to cry.‭  "‬Why,‭ ‬mummy‭?‬"
She stormed out without saying a word.
‬He grabbed the clothes and taking his pyjamas off first,‭ ‬started putting his school uniform on.‭  ‬Why be so horrible to me‭?‬ he thought.‭  ‬He hated it.‭  ‬From the hallway he could hear his younger sister crying.‭  ‬Lately she'd been quite ill.‭  ‬But because mum had been‭ ‬so consumed with her own thoughts she hadn't bothered taking her‭ ‬to the doctors.‭  ‬And if the truth be told,‭ ‬this worried the young boy of twelve.‭  ‬Once he was ready he proceeded quickly to the front door still bleary eyed from lack of sleep.
"‬You kids will be the death of me,‭" ‬said his mother while she rushed to the car with some keys in her mouth.‭  ‬Behind Nathan stood his little sister as she wiped her eyes.‭  "‬Are you feeling better‭?" ‬he asked,‭ ‬brushing a hand through her thick unwashed hair.‭  ‬She didn't answer and decided to suck her thumb instead.‭  "‬I'll see you later,‭" ‬was all he said pecking her on the cheek.‭  ‬Then he headed towards the car where his mother stared at him with disgust as she sat behind the wheel.‭  ‬Once he got in he decided to ask her something,‭ "‬Mummy,‭ ‬why leave Natalie all alone while you take me to school‭?  ‬She could hurt herself.‭"
Suddenly she turned round and slapped him hard in the face.‭  ‬Her breath stunk like sewage.‭  "‬Well if your father‭ ‬wasn't living with some s**t then maybe things would be different.‭  ‬Now put your seatbelt on and shut up.‭"
He placed his bag onto his legs not looking forward to school that much,‭ ‬as lately the bully in his year was now picking on him.‭  ‬I wish things could be different,‭ ‬he thought.‭  ‬Looking back through the window he could see Natalie standing in the open doorway of their home.‭  ‬Then he realised things needed to change.‭  ‬And somewhere faraway someone was listening.
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‬It was about the same time as last night when he awoke with a start.‭  ‬There was a chill in the room.‭  ‬His face still ached from the smack he'd gotten at school from Thomas.‭  ‬With his mother and now the thug in his class giving him grief,‭ ‬he'd just about had enough if the truth be told.‭  ‬All of a sudden there was a tap at the window which made him peer up reluctantly.‭  ‬With great horror he saw a figure standing a few inches behind the glass.‭  ‬It was a woman with the palest of skin,‭ ‬and the blackest eyes he'd ever witnessed.‭  ‬She wore a black dress which stopped a couple of inches from her bare feet.‭  ‬Her hair was dark and long while it moved slightly in the breeze.‭  ‬He didn't know what to say,‭ ‬but stared with a strange fascination.‭  ‬Finally he said,‭ "‬If you're here to frighten me,‭ ‬it's not going to work.‭  ‬So just go,‭ ‬will you.‭"
Her finger nails were extremely long,‭ ‬with one hand she scratched the side of her face and from the wound poured blood.‭  ‬Then she answered softly,‭ "‬I can feel your pain,‭ ‬child.‭  ‬The anxieties which run through your tiny soul worries me.‭  ‬I'm here to help if you wish me.‭"
Nathan didn't know what to think.‭  "‬Are you evil‭?" ‬he asked,‭ ‬mesmerised by her.
"‬I'm only evil to the people which deserve it,‭ ‬but to you,‭ ‬sweet child,‭ ‬I'm an angel sent from heaven to rid you of your demons.‭"
Nathan had a bad feeling come into the pit of his stomach.‭  "‬I don't trust you,‭ ‬because you're a nasty witch,‭ ‬and I know too many of them in this life already.‭"  ‬Sorrow covered her strange looking face.‭  ‬Her eyes were soulless,‭ ‬but held hope which the boy couldn't comprehend.‭  "‬Will you help me then‭?"  ‬he asked putting his hands together,‭ ‬hoping someone would.
‬She neared the window.‭  ‬A slight smile on her face,‭ ‬then she replied,‭ "‬Of course I will,‭ ‬child.‭  ‬That's why I'm here,‭ ‬to rid you of your troubles.‭  ‬I could hear you calling out to me from where I lay amongst the fire.‭"
"Fire means hell,‭ ‬or that's what it says in the bible,‭" ‬the boy cried.‭  "‬You're a demon from hell.‭  ‬Leave me be.‭"
Within moments the woman had vanished.
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‬Another terrible night with hardly any sleep.‭  ‬Nathan could hear his mum arguing with someone in the hallway.‭  ‬Wiping his eyes he made his way over to the wardrobe where his school uniform was.‭  ‬Five minutes later and the boy was fully dressed.‭  ‬On the cabinet sat his bag.‭  ‬He picked it up then proceeded out of the room hoping his mum would be in a better mood than the last few days,‭ ‬even though she could still be heard on the phone ranting about something.‭  ‬The moment she saw him,‭ ‬she handed him the phone aggressively.‭  "‬Your dad wants to speak to you.‭"  ‬With that she walked off to the kitchen while muttering something under her breath.
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‬Mum's mood hadn't improved on the journey to school.‭  ‬She braked hard causing the bag to fly from his legs and hit the dashboard.‭  "‬Sorry,‭ ‬mother,‭" ‬was all he could think of saying,‭ ‬not looking forward to being slapped again.
‬For a second she smiled at him.‭  "‬You know I don't mean to be nasty at times,‭ ‬because you're my special little boy,‭ ‬I love you very much.‭  ‬You do know that,‭ ‬don't you.‭"
This was weird,‭ ‬but he replied not expecting that,‭ "‬Yes,‭ ‬I know you do.‭"
Her tone changed‭ ‬a little,‭ ‬now sounding more serious,‭ "‬What did your father want‭?"  ‬Her eyes had also changed as they stared at him intensely,‭ ‬wanting an answer.
"‬He was just seeing if I was okay,‭" ‬he answered,‭ ‬while he placed his bag back on his legs.‭  ‬He watched her with unease as an odd silence filled the car.‭  ‬Finally he asked,‭ "‬Are you okay,‭ ‬mother‭?"
Then she yelled,‭ "‬No I'm bloody not.‭"  ‬With force she opened his door from the inside and pushed him out of the vehicle causing him to land hard on the pavement.‭  ‬The car flew up the road vanishing behind a church and some trees.
‬Nathan heard laughing,‭ ‬opening his eyes he saw some‭ ‬pupils from his year standing a short distance away giggling at him.‭  ‬He felt so ashamed.‭  ‬He wanted to cry.‭ 
"Even your mother hates you,‭" ‬said one of them,‭ ‬enjoying every minute.
‬Nathan knew what he had to do,‭ ‬and getting up slowly he all of a sudden charged at the kid before smacking him hard in the face.‭  ‬That felt good.‭  ‬Then the headmaster's voice was heard shouting,‭ "‬I saw that,‭ ‬boy.‭  ‬Come here‭ ‬right now.‭"
Before Nathan could do anything another kid jumped on his back.‭  ‬He punched him in the side of the neck making the boy scream out in pain.‭  ‬Once the brute had landed on the hard concrete he kicked him in the ribs.‭  ‬Nathan was now enjoying himself as he put his hands around the boy's throat.‭  ‬From somewhere,‭ ‬someone grabbed him hard around the shoulders and took him to the office.‭  ‬For the first time in ages Nathan didn't care,‭ ‬and it was the best feeling in the world.
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‬His mother came to the school an hour after the fight not seeming too pleased by the whole affair.‭  "‬Get in the bloody car,‭" ‬she said quietly.‭  ‬Once both were in,‭ ‬she turned to him with guilt on her face.‭  "‬I had a chat with the headmaster.‭  ‬What were you thinking‭?"
He peered at her in disgust.‭  ‬But staying calm lied out of his teeth.‭  "‬I messed up,‭ ‬mum.‭  ‬I'm so sorry.‭"
She seemed relieved by this.‭  "‬Since your father has left we're all dealing with a lot.‭  ‬Let's go home like nothing has happened.‭  ‬I begged the headmaster to forgive you,‭ ‬and I told him about my b*****d husband leaving and how it has left us in a predicament.‭  ‬For the rest of the week you can stay at home.‭  ‬Think of it as a holiday.‭"
Nathan for‭ ‬a few seconds saw his old mum back.‭  ‬A smile came over his little face.‭  "‬Thank you,‭" ‬was all he answered.‭  ‬Then both made the short trip home.
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‬That afternoon she drank whisky and staggering all over the place embarrassed the boy immensely.‭  ‬When she was finally in the bedroom sleeping it off Nathan looked in on his sister.‭  ‬She didn't seem too good.‭  ‬He neared the bed.‭  "‬Are you okay‭?" ‬he asked her.‭  ‬Her skin was pale.‭  ‬Her eyes dazed.‭  ‬With her little hand she grabbed his,‭ ‬worry in her eyes.‭  "‬I feel bad,‭" ‬was all she replied.‭  ‬Nathan knew what he needed to do.
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‬That night he waited for the witch to show up.‭  ‬By‭ ‬2.13am he had given up all hope and headed back to his bed,‭ ‬when all of a sudden a tap could be heard.‭  ‬Excitedly the boy looked back to the window.
"‬What do you want‭?" ‬the woman asked abruptly,‭ ‬not looking too happy.
‬The boy felt bad about their last encounter,‭ ‬and answered,‭ "‬I need your help.‭  ‬Please help her.‭"  ‬Nerves now overtook him as he could tell she was in a bad mood.
‬With her long thin hands she covered her dark eyes.‭  "‬Do you know what it feels like when no one wants to see you.‭  ‬And when you finally have the courage all they do is call you an evil old woman with hatred in her soul.‭"  ‬The lady took a step towards the window.‭  ‬A chill‭ ‬entered the room as it made the boy shudder.
‬After a few moments she removed her hands.‭  "‬Why should I help your sister‭?"
"Because I love her.‭  ‬It breaks my heart seeing her like this,‭" ‬Nathan begged.
‬A leer came across her face,‭ ‬before saying,‭ "‬So if I help your sister will you show me the respect which I deserve.‭"
"Yes.‭  ‬I'll do anything,‭" ‬he immediately answered,‭ ‬not really thinking it through what he'd just said.‭  ‬He cared for her very much.
‬She closed her eyes muttering something under her breath.‭  ‬Suddenly she started screaming and blood ran down her legs to her feet.‭  ‬From her body appeared a faint light that floated through the glass before disappearing within seconds.‭  ‬The witch fell to the grass below looking exhausted.‭  ‬After a minute she stared at him with her black soulless eyes.‭  "‬The spell is done,‭ ‬but she needs sleep to recover properly.‭  ‬Go to bed,‭ ‬child.‭"  ‬With that she vanished.‭  ‬Without warning lightening streaked across the night sky.‭  ‬A second later thunder cracked noisily above causing the boy to run to his bed and hide under the sheets.‭  ‬Then like magic he was sound asleep almost instantly.‭  
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‬He couldn't believe the change in her as she danced in the hallway early the next morning.‭  ‬She sang a song still dressed in her blue and red pyjamas.‭  ‬Even his mother seemed shocked by this as she crawled from her pit holding her head.‭  "‬For God sake shut up,‭" ‬she yelled at the girl of six.‭ 
The boy had his door slightly ajar watching,‭ ‬disgusted at his mother for being so horrid.‭  ‬But the smile on his sister's face filled his heart with joy.‭  ‬Peering at the clock it was dead on‭ ‬7.‭  ‬He made his way from his room to the kitchen where his mum‭ ‬was puking in the sink while saying under her breath,‭ "‬Why do I feel so lousy.‭"
"Let me get breakfast,‭" ‬the boy said.‭  "‬As no school means I have more time‭ ‬on my hands.‭"
Once she'd stopped being sick she wiped her mouth on‭ ‬a tea towel which sat on the worktop.‭  "‬Would you do that for me‭?" ‬she asked in a really pleasant way,‭ ‬before adding,‭ "‬Get you and your sister something and I'll head back to bed for a little while.‭  ‬Thank you,‭ ‬Nathan.‭  ‬You're a good kid really.‭"  ‬She roughly ran her hand through his hair before disappearing from view.
"‬You are a good kid,‭" ‬cried his sister as she ran into the‭ ‬kitchen putting two arms around him as she giggled.
‬For the rest of the day both played games while mother slept off her hangover.‭  ‬By five in the afternoon she cooked them a mediocre dinner which they ate reluctantly.‭  ‬Dead on eight both were sent to bed while mother poured herself another glass of wine.‭  ‬Such happy days.
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‬The first thing he saw once he'd opened his eyes was her,‭ ‬standing behind the glass.‭  "‬Thank you for what you did,‭" ‬he said,‭ ‬meaning every word.‭  ‬In her eyes was a little sparkle which he'd never witnessed before.
"‬A life for a life,‭ ‬child.‭  ‬Do you understand what I'm saying‭?"
Nathan's heart began to beat quicker.‭  ‬What did the witch mean‭?  "‬I don't understand‭?" ‬he replied hesitantly clutching the top of the quilt with both hands as they shook through fear.
‬Using her long sharp fingernails she ran them down the window causing a horrible screeching noise,‭ ‬before saying coldly,‭ "‬I saved your sister.‭  ‬Now you owe me.‭"
The boy got out of bed not knowing what to do.‭  ‬When finally he had enough courage,‭ ‬he said nervously,‭ "‬But you said you was here to help me.‭  ‬So you lied to me all along.‭"
"I can do whatever I like,‭ ‬child.‭  ‬With a few words of dark magic I could kill your darling sister from where I stand.‭"
Nathan screamed out,‭ "‬Leave me alone you witch.‭"  ‬He fell to the floor onto his knees,‭ ‬desperate and petrified beyond belief.‭  ‬All of a sudden the door flew open and his mother staggered in hurling abuse.‭  ‬In her hand she held a glass of white wine.‭  ‬She was drunk.‭  ‬The moment she saw the stranger looking in she yelled,‭ "‬Who the hell are you‭?"
Nathan needed to warn her.‭  "‬No,‭ ‬mother.‭  ‬Please don't make her angry.‭"
It was too late.
‬An unseen force dragged the screaming lady to the window.‭  ‬The witch then frantically waved her arms about in the air.‭  ‬Suddenly deep gashes appeared over the terrified woman's face and arms.‭  ‬Blood splashed to the carpet covering the boy while he stared with utter dread.
"‬No,‭ ‬mummy,‭" ‬he shrieked trying to grab her.‭  ‬By accident he tripped hitting his head hard on the side of the cabinet.‭  ‬Then‭ ‬everything went black.
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‬The first thing he saw was the body of his mother,‭ ‬blood everywhere.‭  "‬No,‭ ‬no,‭" ‬he yelled scared out of his little mind.‭  ‬The witch had vanished like a bad dream.‭  ‬Then an awful feeling came over him.‭  ‬I must check on my sister.‭  ‬With as much speed as he could he proceeded‭ ‬out of his bedroom and down the hall.‭  ‬At the entrance he stopped.‭  ‬Complete shock entering his brain.‭  ‬How could everything turn out so bad‭?  ‬The young boy wanted to cry,‭ ‬but he needed to be strong for his sibling.‭  ‬With utter relief he saw his sister in her bed.‭  ‬Walking in he noticed something which sent a chill through him.‭  ‬Her eyes were wide open.‭  ‬Around her throat was bruising.‭  ‬Nathan touched her hand.‭  ‬Her skin felt cold.‭  ‬Please,‭ ‬God,‭ ‬he thought,‭ ‬how could anyone hurt my darling sister‭?  ‬Out of desperation he shook her,‭ ‬hoping she'd wake up.‭  ‬From the back of her head appeared a piece of paper as it fell to the floor.‭  ‬He picked it up,‭ ‬then noticed writing on it.‭  ‬With utter horror he read it.
‬Dear,‭ ‬Nathan.‭  ‬We are more alike than you think.‭  ‬All your wishes have been granted.‭  ‬You don't need to thank me,‭ ‬as on your own you wouldn't have accomplished what we both set out to do.‭  ‬Your beautiful sister will not feel any more pain,‭ ‬and your terrible mother is thankfully dead.‭  ‬Good‭ ‬luck with the future.‭  ‬Love from your special friend,‭ ‬the witch.
‬The boy started crying.‭  ‬He banged the bed with his fist,‭ ‬before yelling at the top of his voice,‭ "‬How could you‭?‬  This isn't what I wanted at all.‭"
Suddenly the front door was kicked open.‭  ‬At the entrance of his sister's bedroom two policemen peered in with concerned looks on their faces.‭  ‬They grabbed the boy,‭ ‬then put handcuffs on him while pinning him‭ ‬against the wall.‭  "‬Why did you do it,‭ ‬sonny‭?" ‬said one of them.
‬Nathan didn't know what they were talking about.‭  "‬Do what‭?" ‬he shrieked,‭ ‬realising he was in big trouble.‭  
One of the policemen who was in his forties stared at him with utter disgust,‭ ‬before replying,‭ "‬How could you do it,‭ ‬kid.‭  ‬One of your neighbours saw you attacking your mother.‭  ‬How could you do something so evil.‭  ‬You disgust me.‭"
The boy was shocked beyond belief.‭  "‬But it was the witch who did it,‭" ‬he yelled,‭ ‬not believing the accusations.
‬They dragged him outside,‭ ‬while he screamed his innocence at the top of his voice.‭  ‬Halfway down the stony drive he realised something which sent terror in his very soul.‭  ‬Maybe the woman at the window didn't exist at all,‭ ‬and it was all in his mind‭?  ‬At this point the boy began to weep,‭ ‬knowing his father would never forgive him for what he'd done.‭  ‬"Please,‭ ‬I didn't mean to do it.‭  ‬Please have mercy,‭" ‬he shouted as they pushed him into the vehicle.
‬All the neighbours stood in the street staring at him with horrified faces.‭  ‬As the car made its way up the road the boy saw her for one last time while she stood amongst the crowd with a smirk on her face.‭  ‬A second later she'd vanished.
                                                                       The End

© 2015 steve


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This is a good, scary story with a lot of twists. At first I thought the woman at the window was good THen that she was bad. THen I didn't know what to think.You didn't make spelling or punctuation mistakes, but I think you should change this sentence: "He peered at her disgustingly.‭ " It doesn't sound right. Try: "He peered at her in disgust."

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steve

9 Years Ago

Bless you, Marie. You're my shining light. xx



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This is a good, scary story with a lot of twists. At first I thought the woman at the window was good THen that she was bad. THen I didn't know what to think.You didn't make spelling or punctuation mistakes, but I think you should change this sentence: "He peered at her disgustingly.‭ " It doesn't sound right. Try: "He peered at her in disgust."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

steve

9 Years Ago

Bless you, Marie. You're my shining light. xx

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