Eternal Love

Eternal Love

A Poem by steve
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A man meets his soul mate.

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Eternal Love

I peered at her with joy in my heart.
What was this feeling I was experiencing.
It confused me to the point of exhaustion.
But secretly it drew me in.
Her eyes being the colour blue, like the most perfect ocean.
Her skin the purest of white, like snow on the most brilliant winter’s day.
I wanted to be near her, to taste her.
I wanted to know everything about her.
With baited breath I approached her, nervous as can be.
She turned and looked, and a smile appeared on her face.
I tried to speak, but nothing would come out.
She reached out her hand to touch mine.
We stared into each others eyes.
At this moment I realised I had met the one.
The soul mate which would be by my side for evermore.
The happiness I felt was unbelievable, heavenly.
An angel of sheer beauty had walked into my life.
This is when I believed in magic again, as life without wonder was a lonely one at that.

The End

© 2012 steve


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Great last line...to a really heartfelt poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet thoughts of love found .. beautiful sentiments .. ..

Jasmine :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

steve

12 Years Ago

Thank you.
It's wonderful when the right people meet at the right time in the right place. That's when love at first sight is truth.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

steve

12 Years Ago

Yes, a shame it hasn't happened to me that often. This was my first stab at writing like this for a.. read more
steve

12 Years Ago

Oh, and thanks for reading it, Marie.
Marie

12 Years Ago

Love like that never happened to me. But it almost did.

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