did ya hear that?

i don't really know.

did ya hear that? it was a whisper in the night it sounds so nice.

Author's Note

i am not done yet

Reviews

[*skittlez*]

i agree with every one else you need to put more on it you r cute

[TTBoy28]

Give it more! Put some form to it!

[619girl]

i agree with everyone else that it would sound better when u add more. Other then that, the start if it sounds very nice and poetic. ;)

[Black Cat Fever]

I like this. Simple yet it has an impact. It will be even better when you add more to it.

[josh]

what the hell is this s**t steven?

[zappy]

nice start