Driving Home

Another Summer sunrise

A clean canvas

I am 

Heading home

Straight road ahead

Far as I can see

Until the bend at the end

The world of women and men

Trying and trying again

Strangers make their way

Their faces face their day

The mother

The crying girl

The satisfied man (for now)

Mystics and Saints

Sinners

Wild Wanderers

Medicine Men

Queens and Kings

And things and things

Riding clouds of credit

The real world of appearances

Contests...

Questions

Conclusions

Questions

Convictions

Still questions...

This!

We are tight strings strumming

An orchestra

Our single verse

A uni-verse

Like water flows to water

To become the glittering silver sea

Public Soul

Why not be

Whole?

Summer sunrise

Clean canvas

Home

Reviews

[bob]

Great piece. I particularly enjoyed the imagery, conjuring clear and imaginative concepts. The use of rhyme is effective in this poem- I assume this is to highlight the important parts of the poem. Thanks for uploading.

[Jen Walters]

Great alliteration here, love the ideas and the message rings loud and clear. Thanks for sharing such a beautifully well written piece and have a wonderful day.