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A Poem by Stephanie
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Limerexes contest entry 2.

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We were never "me and you"

But you still tore my heart in two

Just leading me on

Until I was gone

You broke me and hid the glue

© 2013 Stephanie


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The way you made the font is an amazing way of portraying how low the person feels.. how small and fragile... I love how you did that. And i love the last line, good way of puting that, you are so creative. I like how short it is too, makes the reader linger and think a bit after. Nice :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


such llittle words show so much emotion!! This peom is well writen and i felt what you wrote! GREAT WORK! keep it up!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is such a depth of history and painful experience expressed through these five lines... Brilliantly done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a good piece, Steph. Full of heartbreak and silent questioning.

Posted 15 Years Ago


It short but amazingly powerful good job

Posted 15 Years Ago


(: I love this very much. Great job.

-Mary

Posted 15 Years Ago


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More powerful than the sting of a bee, that is what I see! So much, so little... Well done, Steph! Well done, indeed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Again you nailed it... great limerick... I know it should be sad but I can't help but smile at the flare you put into your words.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2009
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Stephanie
Stephanie

Gilroy, CA



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I'm Stephanie, 27. Still don't know what I want to be when I grow up, even though I have a degree. Getting through some serious writer's block from the past 5+ years. Excited to be back! more..

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