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Its just a poem about how I'm feeling recently now that I've just broken up with my boyfriend.

 

I don't have a love song

left in me.

I'm sitting here all alone

in a room full of crowded couples.

I want to call you

but what's the point?

You don't have what I need anymore.

 

So who does?

I have so much to give

but no one to give it to.

My memories are keeping my heart afloat

but in my mind, this is wrong.

 

My fairytale ending didn't happen,

and now I don't even have a fairy tale.

 

It was just be nice to have new memories to sing my songs to.

Author's Note

I know its very cliche girl type poem...haha..

Reviews

[Pikkakard]

Cliche, maybe, but you portrayed how you are feeling superbly. You're in that stage of limbo where you don't quite want what you had, but you don't quite want what you've got either. Time heals all.

Loved the lines:
My fairytale ending didn't happen,
and now I don't even have a fairy tale.

Brilliant!

[Emily Rose]

You know, even though you admit that it's a little cliche, you actually do a good job with this: it's a much more subtle breakup poem than most of the ones I've read. It's got a lonely, longing feel to it, of course, but it's not overpowering, just distant and nostalgic. So good job - you've turned a cliched subject into something interesting to read :-)