Life on a Tune

I have summoned you dear friend

Because no longer can I keep my breath.

I call you for the last time.

So sing to me,

Play me a spinning melody

To preserve my mind

As it was in childhood.

Please --

Continue turning,

Until my last words

Are no longer clear.

Reviews

[UponATyme]

The second line is a little confusing. Is there supposed to be an "I" somewhere in there? I like your references to turning, spinning, etc. Along with the music, I'm guessing it has something to do with a CD? Maybe even a vinyl record?

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Beautiful piece!flawless!

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Fascinating