Love Poem

I could fill a textbook with your anatomy
write a sonnet with your songs
type a manuscript based solely on your charms
and write your name up and down my arms
so whisper your secrets in my ear

I couldn't care less if they are true

just as long as you will promise, Dear

I'll be the only one you'll whisper to

I want to live between the breaths you take

and dance upon your shoes

Reviews

[fatalsymphonies]

I love the emotional romantic message in this! it made me smile. And I love the touch of "Dear" and also the rhyme, as simple as the flow and rhyme was, it was still perfectly powerful and fit together like a romantic puzzle, i liked it a lot. I think lots of people can relate to this, I know i can!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I want to live between the breaths you take.

And dance upon your shoes

The most romantic lines I read for a very long time / wonderful imagery ... thats real love ... thank you for reminding me ... Yossi

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful Poetry. A Lovely Read.

[Steve]

So SWEET! I love this. This is delightful!

[John Stussy]

Passionate and well-written, I could just feel this as something shared in the quiet night. Excellently done.

[Jon Cooper]

This is awesome! I love
"I want to live between the breaths you take.
And dance upon your shoes." the most.

Quite amazing!

[Rachel DeHart]

I absolutely love this entire thing. Amazing.

As always.

[kaycee]

i really like this one. it's sort of...whimsical. i can see these images blurring together in my mind. i like it.