sweet beeze

its a sweet sense of comfort!!

The sweet breeze, warms my mind, hold my spirit, and takes my hand.

The sweet breeze, cares for me, it deeply loves me, it is my friend.

The sweet breeze, always laughs at my jokes, even though there lame, it does not make me feel ashame.

The sweet breeze, tucks me in at night.

The sweet breeze makes me feel warm and tight.

And even though I cant see it, I can feel it with me all day, I never feel lonely, never in anyway.

Author's Note

any corrections, or ways you think it could be better, im willing to listen.
thanks.

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Pleasing read. I love the way it flows. Keep up the great work