Scarlet Roses, Here to Lie

This is a poem I wrote about the trials of being a young teenager in a world so full of bullies and people who just want to use you. I hope you like it.

Scarlet roses, here to lie
Lost in my heart where they shall die
My mind is far astray
Unjustly thrown away
I have been used and I'm now broken
Suddenly awoken from cruel dreams
I'd cry tears to the roses red
But here I lie, sulking in bed
Born to fly, was I really?
Or am I just a fly in this forsaken world?
But I've learned to try, and now I'm done.
Scarlet roses, here to lie
Laid once again, this time not to die

Author's Note

Nothing really, this time. Just... what do you think?

Reviews

[Sseoni]

What a beautiful poem! I absolutely enjoyed reading it! It was very well written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive. Great use and variety of words! Your poem was very passionate, and full of different emotions! What a fantastic poem! :D