That Feeling

A Poem by this close

I want that feeling.
you know?
That feeling of forever.
So simple,
Yet combined with everything
Love, Lust, Happiness, Sadness
Everything.
But still,
I want that...

© 2012 this close

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Sleeping Maiden

I really love how simple this is but so meaningful at the same time. Lovely piece. Very inspiring! If only life was like that... well, keep writing! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Alicante lullaby

i so love,love,love this...such a simple,mature piece of writing...it communicates ''it'' all,that feeling..

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Invisable_Girl

i love this. i was thinking how i wantd a feeling of forever wen i read this and im like omg. i love ur writing ur very talented

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

graynuss

Love, Lust, Happiness, Sadness this is what i want 2 show in my poems , u do it so well !! i admire u and ur poems (:

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 28, 2012
Last Updated on April 28, 2012

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this close

Archer, GA

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I like cats. I want 42 tortoises went I am older if I do not end up finding a special some one, so left hope someone will love me one day. I like to put on an afro green wig and put on an orange shirt.. more..