The Sudden Pain

The Sudden Pain

A Story by The Doctor
"

this was a thought that came out of the blue

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     "No! How can you? You can't leave Morgan. Not after this."                               "Amber...it has to be done...it's safer." 

"I'll shoot you. I will if you try to leave."
"Than do it." she looks at me with fear and conflict in her eyes

        I go to turn and she yells. "You turn and I'll shoot!" she yells raising the pistol.

 I push my glasses and slowly turn. A crack rings out as a silver bullet rips through my left shoulder blade, I slump to the side, straightening up I feel tears start to fall, I begin to walk forward and another shot meets my kidney.
         I fall to one knee, take a deep breath and then stand, using all the strength that is bleeding from my body and eyes. I taste a tear and it's not just salt....it also has a metallic taste....it's blood....blood..blood from a broken heart.

        I stand and walk forward, receiving another bullet to the small of my back. More red tears and blood fall. I feel her pain the, feel and hear the hysterics in her voice as she yells don't leave me with each shot
     I
 stand, walk another two step and the last bullet drives through my spine, sending numbness through me. I fall into the snow, tears of blood still failing. thump thump thum......
        

The gun is still clicking in my hands as i watch him fall....the one I love..the man I wanted more than ever..killed by me. I fall to my knees, I close my eyes and let out a choking cry as I drop the pistol. "Morgan...I'm sorry." I say almost inaudibly.
         My tears melt the snow on and around the pistol, smoking rising from the barrel...I killed him....now what do I do...
        THE END

© 2010 The Doctor


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Over all this is a good story try reading my story= Any Hope
re-work your format

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your grammar is horrible, I'm sorry to say. xD
But I do love the way it played out :)
I always enjoy reading your pieces. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your grammar is horrible. lol. Just f.y.i
:p

Posted 14 Years Ago



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