Two Beats Are Better Than One

This heart of mine is set aflame

Simply trying to find a heart that burns the same

Two hearts being as One

Is better than One heart beating with None 

 

[This is an original work by Lewis Tedesco. All materials are copyright protected. Materials, in part or in whole, shall not be replicated without first the consent of the original author.]

Reviews

[Lewis Tedesco]

its to stress the importance of the poem, that TWO hearts are better than ONE, it is just for the stressing of the poem that the fact of TWO and ONE. Other than that, it wouldn't have been capitalized. I was giving them some type of formal introduction I guess. I kept it short because if you read some of my other stuff, it is usually long, which I decided, lets keep it short, simple, but still back a wallop in it. Glad you enjoyed it though and look forward to hearing more of your critiques as well as reading some of your work. Take care Alicia!

[Alicia™]

Great piece of work about how hard it truly is to find true love... Great job! I suppose it could be longer, but I like how you kept it short.

The only thing I have the critique, is how you capitalized 'one' and 'two', but I guess that's personal preference...