stupid, stupid boy.

stupid, stupid boy.

A Poem by Diren
"

sad people are sad.

"
I sigh,

I sigh because i'm sad and my breath is covered in
spiderwebs and dust - and it is the most pathetic
case of asphyxia I have ever experienced, chicago
skylights and tipping ferris wheels lining against my
cheeks. don't be sad, city boy, don't be sad.

© 2010 Diren


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Nice
but now you should write about happy days of your life that made you smile.
Keep writing!!!!!1

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay man, don't be sad anymore!
make a happy poem.
hahahahah.

anyway, nice one.
(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice i understand this is something relatable

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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