You're Perfect

The way your hand brushed mine when we walked was perfect. The way your hand fits in mine, even more perfect. Your smile means everything to me, especially the way your eyes sparkle when you do. Your hair is the perfect shade of brown, and your eyes the perfect shade of blue. The way you say I'm beautiful is the most amazing thing in the world. The way you got down on your knee to say "I love you" for the first time was so much more speciall than you know. I like that we balance each other out, like your mere existance completes my soul. The way you kiss me is so sweet, so gentle, and I can always feel you smile through our kiss. I love how you say "I'm falling for you". And the most important thing is,

 

I'm falling for you too.

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Beautifully worded, but that's the opinion of one whose writing can legitimately be called sappy-sweet romance at least sometimes. Loved it. It's really more a poem than a narrative.