Epilogue

Daniel and I never became more than friends, though at first I wanted to be more. I soon found out that having him as a friend was just enough to satisfy me and tie me over until I really fell in love.

To this day, I still don't know what came over me. I guess I was just a teenager in love who didn't understand reality. I mean, come on. A boy climbing through my window every night and falling asleep next to me? No way could that have lasted any longer than it did.

Daniel began to use the front door regularly and my window stayed locked at all times. I did find a guy after Daniel and he's here to stay. He's not a big fan of Daniel and Daniel doesn't like him either. They pretty much avoid each other.

Looking back now, I was pretty naïve from the start. But I've learned a lot since then and I'm proud to say I'm different now. I don't fall for guys who climb through my window any more. I'm way past that.

Reviews

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Well, you kept me going through all the chapters. You have a readable style. I'm glad Kyland finally saw Daniel for what he was, but don't understand why they stayed friends. What really was in it of either of them? You have some good ideas, but really need to add content and make your story more believeable.

[Sophie]

I liked this, it was okay. This is just some criticism here, but nothing happened. There was a bit of a plot, and the plot was good, but no events, and your characters were flat. Now I think it's time for editing and more details. I liked the idea (though I really wished she and Daniel had ended up together!) There's so many problems unsolved and I wish we knew more about the characters, that maybe we could relate to them. Don't get me wrong, I really did like this, but I wish there wa more to it. Sorry for any harshness, it was meant as constructive criticism.

[allonsy_doctor]

Congradulations!! This book was fantastic!!