If Jesus Is A Stranger

If Jesus is a stranger

Check your circle of friends

If Jesus put in a friend request

Would you deny or accept

Would you add Jesus to your friends

Or block him from your profile

Reviews

[Zhavy]

I like the use of pictures within the poem, I would like something longer though. It felt most rushed I think you could have gone more in-depth with social media and religion. Good job though just try to dive a little deeper next time with metaphors, comparison & unity between the two subjects.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Zhavy for the suggestions.

[G!o]

Short but with a message that hits home. I gotta admit, the title is freaking great, because it intrigues the reader, and I would have loved to read more about this in the context of expanding the poem, and addressing most of the social issues that many people shy Jesus away. This a good poem, and a reality check. Keep up the great work.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank G!o for the comment.

[jennifer little]

wonderful write id defently except him and be a friend keep up the good work loved reading it nice write

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Jennifer.

[Onlyme]

Interesting poem Montana, intriquing and unique.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

thank you dawn

[Chryiss]

I was intrigued by the title and enjoyed reading and pondering this piece. After reading the reviews, I agree with both Zhavy and Phil. This topic is thought-provoking and very relevant to today's world. You can really run with it. One suggestion is the repetition of "If Jesus." You could do more of these and then end again without one. In ending without this "If Jesus," even if only repeated twice, it really added to the impact of the last two lines.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Chryiss

[Phill Oz O'fee]

There are many who would not like the idea of befriending a 'healer'; as they make great profits from exploiting the needy - and - their guilt trip may be too big to handle! But, I get the point of your poignant (seasonal inspired) write - well presented and a good read! :-)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Phil