Commitment

Commitment

Someone who will go the distance

Who will be my all in all

Through thick and thin

In good times

And bad

Someone who will work through our issues

And now cower

Or run away from problems

 

Someone who will listen to me

And not ignore me

Because my ideas are stupid

Or foolish

 

Commitment

Someone who will go the distance

Be my all in all

Through thick and thin

In good times

And bad

Reviews

[jennifer little]

great poem great write keep up the good work nice job well done great flow of words

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Jennifer.

[Cherrie Palmer]

A true friend, a lover and a partner in crime is a rare find. Get your order in before Christmas their going fast. :)
I love this.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Cherrie

[Zhavy]

Great job keep up the great work and keep playing around with formatting and stylizing your poetry, after going through a few a notice the consistent use of an image in addition to your amazing rhymes. Don't be afraid to switch it up sometimes

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Zhavy. Suggestions noted.