Fall in Sandpoint, Idaho

The heat of summer is gone

Fall is here again!

Cool breezes

Falling leaves

Leaves changing colors

Red, orange, yellow

Brisk walks 

To the beach

Smell the cool brisk air

Jacket and hoodies abound

Wildlife out 

Looking for food

Before winter sets in

Fall is a refreshing 

Breath of air

The heat of summer gone

Fall has come again

Cool breezes

Falling leaves

Leaves changing colors

Red, orange, yellow

Fall is in the air again!

So grab your hoodie

Take a hike

To the beach

Relax in the brisk cool breeze

Autumn is a lovely time of year!

Reviews

[Briana]

A simple poem for a complex image. I find it a bit too simple... There's certainly a lot of imagery, but very little detail. Near the end it becomes almost like a Hallmark card. It felt too easy, too lacking in layers and depth, and I don't agree with the repetition of lines either. I hope this comes off as the constructive criticism that it is! Please keep writing!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Briana for the review...

[Emily]

I love it!!
Keep on writing!!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Emily.

[Ruth]

Autumn is a favourite season for me though a change all round...beautiful display of the shift of nature :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you Poppy Silver