Episode 6

Episode 6

TAMARA

(dialing Seth II's number in her cell.) Well, Seth, what's your answer?

SETH II

I want a DNA test first before I accept Cody as my son.

TAMARA

Very well, Seth. I knew you would want one, so I have a piece of Cody's hair down at the lab. All you have to do is provide a sample of your DNA to lab.

SETH II

I'll go in at lunch then.

TAMARA

Thank you SETH.

SETH II

Just tell me one thing, Tamara? Why did you keep me in the dark about Cody?

TAMARA

Well, Seth, you had just dumped me for Camille when I found out I was pregnant. I didn't want to ruin your marriage to Camille.

SETH II

Still, you didn't see to it to inform me? I would have stepped up and been responsible for his care.

TAMARA

I'm sorry, Seth. I don't know what to say?

SETH II

Well, it's done now. If Cody is my son, I will do whatever he wishes since he is an adult.

TAMARA

Thank you, Seth. … Oh, I'm sorry Seth, I have a call coming in. I need to go now. I'll keep you in touch of anything.

(Tamara hangs up with Seth II and answers the other call.)

ALEK GARDNER

So, Tamara, did you get the money from Seth II?

TAMARA

There's been a slight glitch.

ALEK

What do you mean a glitch?

TAMARA

Seth wants a DNA test before he will accept Cody as his son.

ALEK

A DNA test?! Tamara, you know Cody isn't his son!

TAMARA

I know, Alek. That's why I have to fake it somehow.

ALEK

It better work, Tamara. If you know what is good for you.

TAMARA

It will, Alek. It will.

ALEK

If Seth II is on to us, I will expose you as the killer of Coralee Cranston, and that you got Jackson Levitt drunk and framed him for the murder.

TAMARA

Seth II doesn't have a clue about any of this. Just take a chill pill. I'll get the money for you.

ALEK

I need out of this cell, and I need out now!

TAMARA

Yes, Alek........

(The cell lost connection when the prison guard came in to the visitor center and told Alek his time was up.)

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

Overall the flow is fine but you use people's names to much. Read it out loud and see if you can hear the repetition.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

thank you for the suggestions Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

A good flow in the conversation helps the reader keep up.
Think of how many times you say someone's name when you talk.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thank you for the suggestions.