Prologue

Victoria thought she met the love of her life when she started her job at the local McDonald's.  Trent was handsome with his dark hair, blue eyes, and 6-foot 1-inch muscular body.  They had started dating a month after Victoria had been working at McDonald's; Victoria was smitten with Trent.  So after a month of dating, Trent took Victoria home to meet his mother.  Trent's mother, Edith, seemed like a sweet lady, but looks were deceiving.  And two months after the wedding, Victoria was beginning to see Edith's true colors.

Reviews

[Mira ThePoetess]

Hi Starr .. I guess you used the word met three times in one sentence in the beginning.
{Victoria thought she [met] the love of her life when she [met] Trent at the local McDonald's where Victoria [met] when she got a job there.}
I think the last one was by mistake ...
As for the prologues it is nice it makes me want to read to know what happens next ....
I will start reading now :D

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Thanks for bring that to my attention...now I see how important it is for others to read your work...they catch the minor details you somehow overlook....thanks for the support

[Mira ThePoetess]

anytime my friend :D