GPS Error

GPS Error

A Chapter by A Soap Mess Stories

Melinda was excited to go her friend, Caralyne's, birthday party and had just gotten into the car and turned on her GPS to give her directions to her address where the party would be having.  It was going to be a great night.  She was hoping to meet some new guys at this party, some well-deserving gentleman, instead of the cruel jerks she has been meeting.  

As she was listening to the voice on the GPS guide Melinda to her intended destination, she got a creepy feeling that she was somehow going out of her way.  Melinda thought Caralyne lived on the west end of town and the GPS was guiding her in the opposite direction.  Melinda thought about turning around and going back, but for some strange reason, she felt the strange notion to keep driving.  

After about fifteen minutes of driving, the voice on GPS lets Melinda know that she is at her intended destination.  She gets out of her Jeep Wrangler and suddenly gets a weird feeling that she's been here before, but can't place when.  Suddenly, a strange man comes out from the shadows.

"Sorry I had to rig you GPS, but this is an urgent matter." said the strange man in the shadows.

"Who are you and what do you want?"  Melinda asked.

"Melinda, it's me, Dex.  The guy you've been talking to online for the last four months."

"Dex?  Oh my gosh!  I can't believe it!  What are you doing here?"

"Well, you said you wanted to meet me.  I was planning a surprise for you.  I wanted our first meeting to be special."

With tears falling from her eyes, Melinda can barely contain her excitement as Dex points her in the direction toward the huge mansion.  Inside the house, Dex has made arrangements for a romantic dinner for two, complete with candlelight and a violinist to play the most beautiful music Melinda has ever heard.  Dex extends his hand out to Melinda and she gladly accepts it as they dance to the beautiful music coming from the violinist.  Before the dance is finished, Dex softly gives Melinda a tender kiss on her sweet lips that makes Melinda faint in the dashing Dex's arms.


© 2014 A Soap Mess Stories


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This chapter is beautiful i can't wait to read more keep up the great work you are amazing writer

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thank you for reading
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You're welcome

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A Soap Mess Stories
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I am a 58-year-old woman who dabbles in fiction writing as well as true crime stories. I mostly write in the romance genre but have some stories in supernatural/paranormal/mystery/thriller genres. more..

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