Glorious

feeling, isn't our life a chaotic mess of how we feel

Down the hill I cried
My tears I couldn't stop
The darkness has taken my light
Through my path I observe
Monsters heading my way
My face into the pillow I put
My body into the bed I throw
My mind to imagination I sold
All my feelings I lost
Could it get better
Could it get easier
Another decade I will survive
Because deeply in my heart
I believe that this is not
What I deserve
Against the pressure I won't give up
Lost my light but found myself
Down the black hill I'm trapped in
Surely I will find sparkles
Myself , I trust
The world I dare
To stop me from doing
What I want
Everything, everyone
I challenge
My life is mine
And my futur is in my hand
I will find glory in awfulness
Wonderful isn't our lives

Author's Note

express yourself, don't keep it all inside , soon there will be no room get it out before it's too late

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

A great poem about the struggles of life and the challenges we face. At first I thought the short line style was cool but half-way through there are some lines that I felt to be forcefully cut short. An example would be:
>I believe that this is not
What I deserve

[starmilina]

yes indeed it is a mistake of mind i didn't pay attention to that i wrote it with tears in my eyes,thank you for your time