pieces

lips whisper memories
lost and unknown

eyes burn souls
cursed and alone

hands grasp truths
tired and done

heart lies awake
broken and shunned

Reviews

[Amanda]

short, but powerful. the connection between the body parts and the actions are astounding.
a very good piece of work.

well done.

Amanda @};--

[Jessica Benfield]

short and certainly sweet! amazing work of words, the flow was astounding!
smiles,
jess

[H.]

Call my cynical, but I think all poems like this should be as brief. The more powerful of an emotion you're tugging at, the less words need to be in the way. I like the body parts theme, and you put a very rigid structure to it that worked well. (But damn you for making me think about heartbreak.)