Save me

needing someone to save me

I want to taste redemption when you kiss me

I can see salvation in your eyes

Your touch frees that piece of my soul

Still tangled in damnation

An abundant gift your love wants to give me

Freedom

I want you to whisper my future to me

I want to know in your arms everything will be alright

My burden is so heavy

My headache is so strong

I want to trust you to lighten my load

To carry me when I need you to

To comfort me when no one else can

I stand with one foot dangling over the edge

Pull me back

Save me

Just save me

Reviews

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"I want to trust you to lighten my load" That is quite a pondering thing to do. Learning to trust. I like this. Your last four lines amazing. That is where we need the trust right there. Knowing someone may be there for you to catch you.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

Great work, really gets the message out there. I love the sense you instill that longs for freedom.

[Dream Weaver]

To save; “to rescue somebody or something from harm or danger”
Flowed exceptionally well, tense and malleable...nicely done...

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this poem leaves some room for hope.
Feelings are sad but they are very well expressed.