how could you

how could you be so self confident without being
cocky
how could you be so beautiful while being so
bald :)
how could you be so happy when your youth was so
hard
how could you have no
fear
how could you always make me
laugh
how could you remember all those stupid trivia
facts
how could you answer almost any question I
asked
how could you always be
warm
how could you know just how to look at
me
how could you take away all my pain with one
kiss
how could I feel like our souls were
one
and lastly how could you leave
me
how could you
die...

Reviews

[dear daniel]

I'm sorry for your loss. At moments like these I feel like it's best to remember that love can't only be alive in one person. Love is all around you. While they may be gone, their love won't die. The body is simply a vessel for the love that exists in everything. I loved reading this because I could tell how much you loved them. It's been 14 years since you posted this. I hope that love is still alive in you.

[Sara Mercury]

Sounds much like the lament from someone who knows precisely what it's like to lose somebody to earthly death. Wow.

[Ak Oldman]

wow... I can feel your pain, and I can understand it, lost my best friend 3 years ago...
great piece and hope things are working out for you...

[C. Lee Battaglia]

It was very nice!
...I know how it feels when you lose a best friend... (Read The Blonde Girl if you want to find out) I am so sorry... I wish you the best of luck. He sounded like a really nice guy.
:)
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Alexis]

wonderful piece good luck :)

[M]

good description of agony :) thanks for sharing.

[Vani Jalagar]

pleasure in the beginning and pain in the end..so many questions left unanswered...
unbearable grief :)
loved it :)

[Cassie]

how could you die...this is the saddest part, *teary*

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

#crying...wow! simply beautiful

[Clive D Costa]

Piece that describes solid sadness.