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I've watched you tear me down
then pick me up all over again.
You've tried to tell me
you can heal me but,
I'm still bleeding on the inside.
You offer me the world,
I still have nothing.
What can you do,
 

Reviews

[ICE]

I liked this!
Very straight forward and to the point.
I believe that at some point everyone has felt this way.
WIsh it was longer.
Good job!

[Alyssa]

I like this, its short and to the point.
I brings across the message well :)