kentucky wind

kentucky wind upon my hand blowing freely in my hair
you gave me peace you gave me light while in deep dispair
kentucky wind in you i found freedom although utterly bound.
you came blowing... timely fashion... in sorrow, you were joy
you were there right when i needed your embrace
pick me up
blow wind blow
sweep me away with you
in you i forgot
in you i could breath
at times for only a second
other times continuously
the sun burning hot on my skin
sweat pouring
and you came to rescue me
when you touched me i felt it within
Kentucky Wind i love you
im happy to say ill never feel your blow again.

Another beautiful tragedy... it was all a dream... now i know what is real...

Reviews

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reminded my of Dorothy in Wizrd of Oz..!

[Hollow Man]

This sounds like a song. Kentucky Wind...i'm diggin your style. that's a great metaphor. Good write love

kgs

[Tony]

Really like the sudden contrast in the second to last line-- and the final line wrapped it all up well. The "kentucky wind" metaphor was spot on in describing a person and a former relationship.