shards

shards

A Poem by star-crossed

my eyes began to water
when i got that text
my head got hotter
for you were on to the next

when i tried to respond
my sight got blurry
as tears formed a pond
my emotions were in a flurry

this is the second time
the second time my heat was abused
this broken heart of mine
the heart i wish i never used

it took me months to put back together the pieces
last time at least
to fill all the crevices and creases
but this time my heart is fully decease

it shattered when it fell on the ground
all that was left in my was a single shard
i could not longer hear it pound
i used all my strength, but it was just too hard

© 2011 star-crossed


Author's Note

star-crossed
ignore grammar , and punct.

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"just too hard" says a lot about alot, too true too often. Nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ignoring grammar and punctuation (as per the note), this is still a pretty good poem. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2011
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